Morbid Obsession (Kynthos)

3 stars plus

Marcus, a Scout Pilot Class IV was ordered to investigate a distress signal from an rusty inhabitable planetoids. A task which is out of his job scope really. Nevertheless, an order is an order especially for a small fry like him, there's no room to wiggle out of this absurd mission to check out an alien planet without any backup other than the company of his smart-ass AI Computer, Charlie. Fat load of help it was. Though Charlie did provide some comic relief to tone down the eeriness of that planet. One can't get too scared while laughing away right? Wrong.

The author was pretty good at creating and building up atmospheric tension and the feeling of foreboding. There's one rather cool scene which I am in awe of, whereby... [SPOILER: Please highlight the empty space here to read spoiler] the dense foliage and fauna found by Marcus melted into pool of viscous sludge which moves of its own accord towards an alien tree in the center of the room, seemingly being absorbed by said tree.[Spoiler Ends] That scene was very well described and feels much like those creepy Hollywood scifi flick.

What About the Sex? This IS an Erotica Right?

Frankly, I am not very happy there's a filler sex scene in it which feels utterly artificially inserted into the story just to inflate the word counts. Blargh to that! Boo, boo! It wasn't even the least bit titillating in any way. A waste of space - space for more tentacles goodies! Moving forward to the tent-sex; it was warm, wet, slippery and slimy just the way I like it. Forceful and demanding, yes. Lovely sucking and vigorous fucking. Undulating, vibrating tentacles which could even expand its size at will. Marcus was deliciously stretched tight as a drum on both ends, nearly to the point of asphyxiation - something for the breathplay fetish crowd? Having a long thick tentacle wiggling in your gullet is the ultimate redefinition of deep-throating.

Was all that hot? Yes it was. Was it titillating? Yes it was. Especially loving all the above done while the victim's tightly restraint and struggling with all his might. Yet... I am not feeling enough mad struggling here to fulfill my perversity. Maybe I have too high level of perverseness. *shrugs* I would love it better if the act of halpless struggling was paid more attention by the author. Better still, I would burst in orgasmic mushrooms clouds should the author inserts abundance of the victim's panic thoughts as he contorts and twist his body in attempt to flee the assault while his body's blooms in arousal by the forced stimulation. This is why I absolutely adore, Gay Tentacles From Space! by Charlotte Mistry cos it has all the right elements I have mentioned here and more to leave a tent-sex fans like me breathless and blissfully sated.

I have to say, the ending was abrupt. At first I objected and pouted bout it yet later found it to be rather fitting especially once I realized there's an open challenge for the readers to piece together a clue the story left earlier on before the alien was encountered. And here's my take to it... [SPOILER: Please highlight the empty space here to read spoiler] I vouch that towards the end of the story while Marcus was debating on eating the alien life-form, he was actually slowly melting away like those foliage and fauna mentioned earlier on then absorbed by this alien of multiple-consciousness. The alien did say Marcus had to 'eat them' to be melded together with it and didn't Marcus did just that. He had swallowed copious alien jism on both ends, that should meet the criteria of eating them right? [Spoiler Ends] So there you have it! How's my wild imagination? Good?

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